Hey guys ^^
As always, I'm bored and it seems no one's posted a forum here :)
So let me start by giving my own work ^^
This is the introduction to the book I'm currently working on ^^
Please tell me what you think 8D
I'll appreciate it ^^
Copyright Ana Erika Alexandra Gumban
Introduction
Acknowledgement, Appreciation, Love…not exactly what you’d find in this book. Blood, Gore, Sacrifice…that’s the reality of life. I won’t dwell too long on the introduction as I may not be able, or more accurately, I “will not” be able to relay to you the entire message of this story…their story. The good die young, while the old and the cursed live longer…unfair, but true. That’s life, this is what everyone has to face day after day as they continue living but some can’t compare to the trials that others may encounter. Five17 year-old boys bear the entire weight of the earth on their shoulders, as they save it from impending doom. We as humans make mistakes, but for them, one false move could trigger the end of the world, and one wrong decision could cost them their lives. Harsh?... That may be… Cruel?...Yes it is…A chosen destiny?...Not even close. Since birth, they’d been destined to save the earth, but it is their choice whether or not to pursue that prophecy. Pursue it and they can save their home, but then again, what kind of home has it ever been to them? Ignore their calling and live as normal human beings? It would be nice, yet the world could end at any second. The future of the earth depends on them, and if they fail to protect it, what becomes of this earth heavily polluted with the species known as humans? A species known to kill one another for an object called “money”, a species known to make each other suffer for such small things like “status” or “pride”, the same species who did not change their sinful ways nor even care that a man died for them to achieve salvation. Thinking and lamenting on these things, will it really be a wise decision to save the human race? Or would it not be better if they’d all gone extinct? Then, God’s creatures could roam the earth without fear, and the great cycle of life could continue. Then, mother earth would remain flourished and untouched, just as God has modeled it to be. Then, and only then will the world be at peace…but that’s not how things are supposed to be…and humans need to exist…at least, that’s what the humans think…
Copyright Ana Erika Alexandra Gumban
As always, I'm bored and it seems no one's posted a forum here :)
So let me start by giving my own work ^^
This is the introduction to the book I'm currently working on ^^
Please tell me what you think 8D
I'll appreciate it ^^
Copyright Ana Erika Alexandra Gumban
Introduction
Acknowledgement, Appreciation, Love…not exactly what you’d find in this book. Blood, Gore, Sacrifice…that’s the reality of life. I won’t dwell too long on the introduction as I may not be able, or more accurately, I “will not” be able to relay to you the entire message of this story…their story. The good die young, while the old and the cursed live longer…unfair, but true. That’s life, this is what everyone has to face day after day as they continue living but some can’t compare to the trials that others may encounter. Five17 year-old boys bear the entire weight of the earth on their shoulders, as they save it from impending doom. We as humans make mistakes, but for them, one false move could trigger the end of the world, and one wrong decision could cost them their lives. Harsh?... That may be… Cruel?...Yes it is…A chosen destiny?...Not even close. Since birth, they’d been destined to save the earth, but it is their choice whether or not to pursue that prophecy. Pursue it and they can save their home, but then again, what kind of home has it ever been to them? Ignore their calling and live as normal human beings? It would be nice, yet the world could end at any second. The future of the earth depends on them, and if they fail to protect it, what becomes of this earth heavily polluted with the species known as humans? A species known to kill one another for an object called “money”, a species known to make each other suffer for such small things like “status” or “pride”, the same species who did not change their sinful ways nor even care that a man died for them to achieve salvation. Thinking and lamenting on these things, will it really be a wise decision to save the human race? Or would it not be better if they’d all gone extinct? Then, God’s creatures could roam the earth without fear, and the great cycle of life could continue. Then, mother earth would remain flourished and untouched, just as God has modeled it to be. Then, and only then will the world be at peace…but that’s not how things are supposed to be…and humans need to exist…at least, that’s what the humans think…
Copyright Ana Erika Alexandra Gumban
